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I like the way you've outlined it and how you've coloured it as well. It does feel a bit rough somehow... I'm not sure if that is because of the way the fineliner is a bit... smudgy there?
It's not bad as it is, though. What you've drawn maintains a bit of mystery and.. yeah, we're really focused on the main subject matter there.
As for the poem, it's fitting of the visual piece. I like the repetition and how it progresses from something quite soft to something that.. alludes to harshness, I guess.
Awesome stuff.
Thanks!
Yeah, I had to hurry since I had to illustrate the other 3 for my little poetry project.
Oh wells....
It was fun, I took a picture of myself to get the hand right...
Thanks.